Hi guys,
New post on the Dino Brawl! :) Still polishing the idea, now also polishing the timing of it before I start real blocking and animating (that includes ALL posing and choreography). Critiques: ENGAGE!
Enjoy!
Isai
New post on the Dino Brawl! :) Still polishing the idea, now also polishing the timing of it before I start real blocking and animating (that includes ALL posing and choreography). Critiques: ENGAGE!
Enjoy!
Isai,
ReplyDeleteThis is looking really cool! I think the choreography is working well overall. I'm noticing two places where I think you might need more time to really sell the weight. When the T-Rex falls down it feels like he stops and springs back up really fast - overlap will help but you could add some more time in here. Also, when the T-Rex grabs the Triceratops' neck I think the acceleration into the throw is a bit fast - I would slow it down to really sell the weight, especially since the T-Rex is throwing the Triceratops from such an awkward position where he can't apply his full strength. Great work, I can't wait to see how this comes out!
Rob
Hey Isai. I think your off to a great start here. A coupe of things. I think you can start at the second poze in your shot. That poze is a nice clear read and feels stronger then your current start frame. I think you need to take more time to get the Trice around after he throws over the T-Rex, it feels to fast right now. And take another second or so to have the two stare down each other before the T-Rex charges back at the Triceritops. It would help with thepacing of the shot to have a little break before the next action beat. Try to amp up the T-Rex's anticipation before he bites down on the Triceritops at the end. I also think you could end on that big bite and maybe a sharp twist, but it does not need to go on as long is it currently does.
ReplyDeleteIt's looking really cool and I hope you will have time to break it down and polish it up before the class is over. Great work!
Pete