Hey this is looking great, my only feedback is for frm 113-158. The root is moving well but the feet don't feel like is adjusting to the torso moving forward. I would guess you would need to add more "foot-roll" control to get the feet to look more natural.
The green guy. His back leg (the knee) is too high up. It looks uncomfortable. If you bring it down he might look more "relax".
It's looking cool Rob. I like the timing of the walk up, it has a nice "creep" feel to it. There is a part towards the end of the walk up where I want that back leg to pick up a little bit sooner. It feels like the body or root con is not in sync with the legs during that one part. I also think you can raise up the arm to anticipate the slap and the slap can be a bit faster. Try taking out 3 or 4 frames and see what that will give you. You could also overlap or continue the slap over so we feel the arm reaching out after he hits the lizard. I like the timing of the exit, but there is a pause or beat after the slap and then the exit and I think you want to reduce that pause so it goes slap and then fast exit. So get him out of the scene as fast as you can after the slap. I hope that makes sense. Looking forward to seeing it again on Monday.
It's looking cool Rob. I like the timing of the walk up, it has a nice "creep" feel to it. There is a part towards the end of the walk up where I want that back leg to pick up a little bit sooner. It feels like the body or root con is not in sync with the legs during that one part. I also think you can raise up the arm to anticipate the slap and the slap can be a bit faster. Try taking out 3 or 4 frames and see what that will give you. You could also overlap or continue the slap over so we feel the arm reaching out after he hits the lizard. I like the timing of the exit, but there is a pause or beat after the slap and then the exit and I think you want to reduce that pause so it goes slap and then fast exit. So get him out of the scene as fast as you can after the slap. I hope that makes sense. Looking forward to seeing it again on Monday.
Hey this is looking great, my only feedback is for frm 113-158. The root is moving well but the feet don't feel like is adjusting to the torso moving forward. I would guess you would need to add more "foot-roll" control to get the feet to look more natural.
ReplyDeleteThe green guy. His back leg (the knee) is too high up. It looks uncomfortable. If you bring it down he might look more "relax".
It's looking cool Rob. I like the timing of the walk up, it has a nice "creep" feel to it. There is a part towards the end of the walk up where I want that back leg to pick up a little bit sooner. It feels like the body or root con is not in sync with the legs during that one part. I also think you can raise up the arm to anticipate the slap and the slap can be a bit faster. Try taking out 3 or 4 frames and see what that will give you. You could also overlap or continue the slap over so we feel the arm reaching out after he hits the lizard. I like the timing of the exit, but there is a pause or beat after the slap and then the exit and I think you want to reduce that pause so it goes slap and then fast exit. So get him out of the scene as fast as you can after the slap. I hope that makes sense. Looking forward to seeing it again on Monday.
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It's looking cool Rob. I like the timing of the walk up, it has a nice "creep" feel to it. There is a part towards the end of the walk up where I want that back leg to pick up a little bit sooner. It feels like the body or root con is not in sync with the legs during that one part. I also think you can raise up the arm to anticipate the slap and the slap can be a bit faster. Try taking out 3 or 4 frames and see what that will give you. You could also overlap or continue the slap over so we feel the arm reaching out after he hits the lizard. I like the timing of the exit, but there is a pause or beat after the slap and then the exit and I think you want to reduce that pause so it goes slap and then fast exit. So get him out of the scene as fast as you can after the slap. I hope that makes sense. Looking forward to seeing it again on Monday.
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